MARK FIDDES

Mark Fiddes lives in South London and, therefore, spends most of his life on the Northern Line. Having studied philosophy, he has worked in Washington, D.C. as a journalist and around the world as a creative director. Last year, he was a finalist in the National Poetry Competition, runner up in the Fish Publishing International Flash Fiction Competition and shortlisted in the Lightship International Fiction Competition. Follow him on Twitter @fiddesmark .
Highly Commended in the Gregory O'Donoghue International Poetry Competition
The Lost Gardens of West Norwood
Spring has not been a great success
In the claylands of South London
Now daubed in dog shit fauvre
And splashes of sepsis yellow
May’s the cruellest month on record
Even the crows have lost interest
“We are now approaching Balham”
The recording announces
Without sympathy or respect
Weary sheds and flailing trellis
Early cabbage and sacks of woe
Spilling bottles to Streatham Hill
Where late commuters goggle eyed
Wait outraged as stranded salmon
The lost gardens of West Norwood
Buried many Edens deep in
A conspiracy of ivy
Yield the flotsam of summers past
Plastic chairs and cricket bats
The slow rusting barbeque
That carbon dates the happiness
Of a long divorced family
In the drizzle of Gypsy Hill
Pale mansions damp with memory
Dissolve gently as pain-killers
Into the moss-choked guttering
We shunt on to Crystal Palace
Twinned with Melancholia
A murder scene with brick arches
And ornamental dinosaurs
Behind the sweating café glass
A man holds his lover closer
Than a cello, breathing her hair
For the first bowed note of summer
While on we roll to London Bridge
Their kiss blooming deep within us
©2013 Mark Fiddes
Judge's Statement
This is a rare and excellent railway poem, reminiscent of the giant work by Philip Larkin, echoed very cleverly in the kissing couple, their embrace ‘blooming deep within us.’ But instead of the water meadows of Lincolnshire we have ‘the claylands of South London’. The formal verse structure, the relentless movement towards Crystal Palace that contains love behind glass, creates a terrific sense of movement and control.
Author Links
Wall Flower Power: Mark Fiddes's poetry blog
Fish Anthology 2012 containing flash fiction by Mark Fiddes
Lightship Anthology containing a story by Mark Fiddes
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